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This page conserves the character fiction forum of the Agora forums. The posts have been left unformatted to make it easier for users to copy them here and paste them into the new forums.

Oren Itanooren12/10/08 18:25View
Missy12/10/08 22:22View
The backstory of Vulpes.Vulpes12/11/08 01:46View
Erica KesselErica Kessel12/11/08 07:52View
Missy's Story.. a Do-over and another ChapterMissy12/11/08 22:38View
UsrBinPerl12/11/08 23:48View
oren12/11/08 23:57View
Kwekwe's BackstoryKwekwe Karu12/12/08 01:02View
UsrBinPerl12/13/08 00:35View
Eternal SunsetMissy12/13/08 12:19View
Kit Ristow12/14/08 00:01View
ShyMathys12/14/08 00:27View
MasksAlissa12/14/08 00:58View
Lorae12/14/08 01:24View
UsrBinPerl12/14/08 22:07View
Missy's Story Continued..Part 3Missy12/16/08 08:43View
Missy's Story Part 4: Innocence ShatteredMissy12/16/08 18:34View
Missy's Story Part 5: Innocence AnnihilatedMissy12/18/08 17:16View
Small DangersVox12/18/08 21:36View
Saint of The Abyss: Part 1Luciferiel12/19/08 05:21View
Zero....-1Justa Zero12/19/08 17:38View
Zero....1Justa Zero12/19/08 18:26View
Óðr’s Daughter. Chapter I: A Guiding DreamAsil Karu12/20/08 02:39View
Omega To Alphaerinnic12/23/08 16:49View
Her Bloody Tears [-Past Event-]Methias12/23/08 18:09View
Lost Kitsune - A Shattered MindKiera12/25/08 18:51View
Usr's story Part IVUsrBinPerl12/27/08 20:34View
The EssexHeir Maelstrom12/29/08 04:23View
Kwekwe's shameKwekwe Karu12/30/08 18:11View
Joint Round Robin Fic Anyone...?erinnic12/30/08 19:07View
God Was On Her Lips As She Diederinnic01/02/09 23:31View
Love and Betrayal - A New Beginningkessjuliesse01/03/09 13:46View
The Diary of Cody Woodhencodywoodhen01/05/09 21:35View
Missy's Story Part 6: Innocence AbductedMissy01/07/09 06:23View
Cursed BladeYannis_Martynov01/08/09 21:27View
Story Thread: Community Round Robin Ficerinnic01/09/09 23:25View
The demon withinCanly Fargis01/11/09 16:14View
Ziau- CoLA's Very Own CasanovaZiau01/13/09 02:09View
Twisted Attentionserinnic01/21/09 20:34View
Inspiration- music and roleplayZiau01/26/09 08:01View
Compilation! Where were you when it all happened?Ziau01/28/09 09:12View
The Clock Struck MidnightMalice Ashdene01/28/09 22:31View
With Precision- a poem by Kelly Welch A.k.A Ziau Jua.Ziau01/29/09 04:36View
Alisa's dicovery of a new world (character sheet + story)Alisa Draconia01/30/09 19:17View
The Shadow Stepper- Ziau the Enshadowed.Ziau02/01/09 07:26View
Krista Lemon arrives to the streets of Lost AngelsKrista02/03/09 00:09View
Back Story Upto the Excile of Rune.RuneCrimson02/03/09 21:59View
War with the Brood, war with the Coven, and the Pack.Ziau02/07/09 04:11View
-- Halcyon's Backstory --Halcyon Nacht02/08/09 00:22View
Planer/Exonar family (aka, Erinyse, Khalan, Viridian, Cummere, Selena)Cummere Mayo02/08/09 03:53View
Kit's BackstoryKit Ristow02/10/09 18:40View
Eyes in the DarkKeyla02/11/09 09:47View
Surfacing Part ILlyr02/13/09 22:21View
Surfacing Part IILlyr02/13/09 22:35View
Tama-Chan: A Cat's Story (Tamara's background)Tamara02/17/09 07:35View
Project: A map of Post Apocalypse North AmericaTamara02/17/09 19:21View
Dreamtime RevelationsWinter02/19/09 18:08View
Reaver-the echo of the BlackwindAntiZero02/23/09 00:43View
On the Origin of SpeciesTamara02/25/09 22:38View
ConfessionKit Ristow02/26/09 01:39View
Personnel File: Pointe, Zsuzsanna C. (Inactive, Deceased)Su Pointe02/26/09 03:32View
Malice, in a Different Kind of WonderlandMalice Ashdene02/27/09 18:07View
The Dark of InspirationKit Ristow03/01/09 21:42View
Jheric: CrucifiedKayle Ashdene03/03/09 10:53View
It's my lifearsene_Braveheart03/05/09 18:18View
The Tradgedy of the HybridDigital Enigma03/29/09 07:09View
The Sin of Wrathmolly switchblade04/02/09 21:28View
Golden BoyEphran Ehrler04/15/09 06:12View
Story About A GirlAesendria04/24/09 15:34View
Climaxe by Smith and WessonSloan04/28/09 06:19View
My new project ATTENTION Russian Characters!Ziau05/01/09 06:42View
**NSFW** A Typical Tuesday Night for MissyMissy05/06/09 20:48View
Post your profile links!Cortero Landar05/07/09 10:25View
Making Logan SufferAesendria05/12/09 07:09View
Jeanne VarunJeanne Varun05/14/09 08:24View
The Vanguard's True PurposeLogan05/16/09 01:03View
Cortero's Infernal ArmorCortero Landar05/16/09 06:52View
Bookstore SurpriseAesendria05/16/09 23:16View
Post your profile links if you have in-story info in them!Cortero Landar05/18/09 10:33View
PromisesAesendria05/24/09 02:44View
Cyber Evolution Bios, Anur Seda, Cyber Reaper, and Commander of CETheassassin06/08/09 11:28View
Was any of it real?Youko_Giha06/12/09 15:28View
A shift in prioritiesLogan06/17/09 04:21View
Going homeLudvig06/17/09 19:10View
'Ren in Japanoren06/18/09 23:11View
Thelma across the boardThelemaJuliesse06/26/09 15:09View
Pre-fiction: How Kayteear got here.Kayteear07/15/09 16:43View
Story TimeCharissa07/17/09 19:03View
Pack Airship RP.Tai07/27/09 02:49View
My CharacterLilith1308/05/09 22:34View
LilithLilith1308/06/09 09:30View
The Haunter in the DarkShadow08/14/09 21:50View
The Flying HeadsKwekwe Karu08/16/09 16:52View
Why selling coffins is impossible in CoLAZiau08/23/09 04:14View
Paint it red!Ziau08/23/09 07:51View
Young Cowards.Ziau08/23/09 08:28View
Great video for RPers and people passionate about writing.Ziau09/05/09 08:55View
Dux - 264 BCDux09/10/09 18:41View
The Thing at South Gate SanitariumShadow09/15/09 22:09View
♪♫ Do you wanna RP my avatar ♪♫Kayteear09/17/09 14:45View
Jessica's MotherJessica Susser09/21/09 04:19View
Ziau Challenged me to. NSFWChasityDawes09/21/09 07:17View
The Divine Machine.................Theassassin09/21/09 22:29View
I Bleed my Blood for Myself.Ziau09/22/09 22:28View
Cronicle of a deathKayteear09/24/09 01:34View
"Please Allow Me to Introduce Myself"DavidJoshua Artful09/26/09 17:07View
Old Versus NewDigital Enigma09/27/09 20:28View
The Shadowed Order, The Eternal Order, Ordo MachinaTheassassin10/06/09 06:55View
Elamyrath's HistoryElamyrath10/10/09 00:52View
The here, the now, the dead. The Minus.TheMinus Ziskey10/10/09 12:41View
Before bed ritual.Amy Guisse10/17/09 04:13View
Alone?Ike10/18/09 15:34View
IS this High School again?Theassassin10/24/09 12:49View
Sidhe vs DrowOrlok Lectar10/29/09 04:08View
Daddy bluesarsene_Braveheart11/17/09 19:01View
Chronicles of SIEagentlyseria11/22/09 12:27View
The Lady In Black(A Drokan Exile Twisted Love Story)AntiZero11/29/09 06:36View
The growing Darkness.Leirain Koray12/01/09 11:04View
The lycanKayteear12/01/09 16:00View
City of Lost Jackman: The Untold Hollywood BlockbusterAntiZero12/02/09 07:11View
Coming home for christmas ..Kes12/10/09 22:17View
Bunneh Vs. Lich, DBZ styleKarsha Yutani12/14/09 11:59View
A FarewellRoland12/16/09 20:50View
Of Death and RebirthDigital Enigma12/21/09 20:14View
The Story of ReocoReoko Farspire02/06/10 20:47View
Homecoming......... The Story of Orpheus DarkfoldOrpheusDarkfold03/11/10 02:27View
The Story of Orpheus Part 2OrpheusDarkfold03/13/10 23:15View
Who owns who?Kayteear03/22/10 22:03View
Missing the Oceanricercar03/23/10 22:27View
Letter to the editor: Manners in LATink03/25/10 16:58View
Chasity BackstoryChasityDawes06/14/10 19:43View
Something Black and Violent...DavidJoshua Artful06/19/10 22:23View
Doctor Visiterinnic07/12/10 04:26View
Gabby Perdidevacantghost07/19/10 04:42View
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Jessica SusserJess sat on the rooftop of the San Francisco General Hospital. She felt a warm tear stream down her cheek. Just hours ago, she had held her mother’s hand as she watched her die from a gun-shot wound to the torso. “It’s okay Jessie, I’ll be alright, I promise.” So much for promises.
Jessica had never met her father, he had disappeared the night of her birth, the same night the looting had started. He was a vampire, or so her mother said, which explained Jess’ thirst for blood. She loathed her father for leaving her and her mom to fend for themselves after the apocalypse. The death of her mother only fueled this rage as she sat, crying on the rooftop. She looked over the city, remembering what had just happened only hours before…

She walked down the street, heading home with food in hand. The food was for her mother, who was waiting for her at the abandoned apartment they had found in one of the less occupied areas in San Francisco. As she rounded the street corner she saw a man standing on the stoop of her apartment complex, smoking a cigarette. Her free hand went instinctively to her pocket, where she kept a small Walther PPK. She thumb-cocked the trigger as she walked up and offered the man a smile, heading towards the door. He smiled back, but otherwise seemed to ignore her. She sighed, relieved as she walked up the steps to the door.
A hand gripped her shoulder. She gasped softly and dropped the plastic bag, spilling its contents over the stoop, a can of beans rolled down the steps and came to rest in the gutter.
“Where do you think you’re going?” a calm, masculine voice said.
She dropped to her knees instantly and pulled the PPK, spinning around and shoving the gun to his gut, pulling the trigger and sending the bullet into the man’s stomach. He crumpled instantly, clutching his stomach. She aimed the pistol at his head and fired another shot, ending his existence…

As she retraced her footsteps through the day’s events, her tears began to dry up, leaving nothing but a slightly glistening trail where there were still a few traces of the salty tear’s path. Her mother was the only family she had, and now a bunch of common thugs had killed her. Sure she returned the favor, but that wasn’t enough for her. She wanted her mother, she was only 14. It wasn’t supposed to be like this. Kids were supposed to have a father and a mother to protect them from this hostile world, but she had neither, she was just a lone dhamphir trying to cope with the death of the only real family she had ever had, and the only one who ever loved her…

She ran up the stairs, gun in hand as she rounded the corner, seeing yet another man in her doorway. She fired two rounds at his head, snuffing out his insignificant life without a second’s hesitation. She managed to get about 5 feet closer to the apartment as another thug entered the hall, she fired one round which buried itself in the man’s temple before he had managed to see where it had come from.
She burst through the apartment doorway…

The tears had resumed their flowing as she continued surveying the city, wondering what was next. She had nothing left in this world, no one to go to when she needed a shoulder to cry on or a good laugh, no one to kiss goodnight, no one to comfort her when things seemed dim. She was completely and utterly alone. The only thing she could think about was death. Suicide seemed like such a simple matter, all she had to do is jump…

Her mother lay limp in the floor of the apartment, nude with a single gun-shot wound to the chest, lying in a pool of her own blood. Jess tossed her gun aside, running over to the bathroom and grabbing a blanket before returning to her mother.
“Jessie?” her mother said weakly, he eyes watery as she stared off into space, obviously not able to see her daughter.
“Yeah mom” she choked trying to fight back a sob “I’m going to take you to the hospital, everything will be okay”
“Jessie… I…” before she could finish her sentence she lost consciousness, she was still alive, Jess could hear her pulse as she wrapped the body tenderly, scooping it up into her arms as she ran down the stairs. She was strong for a 14 year old girl, but she had her vampiric father to thank for that. She burst out the door, running at a dead sprint to the hospital, carrying her mother, she didn’t know how futile this really was…

She jumped. She had nothing to lose, no father, no mother, and she couldn't return to her apartment after what had happened. As she fell, the wind dried her tears, leaving nothing but glistening trails of salt . The sixth floor flew by, then the fith, the fourth. Everything was happening in slow motion, the wind ripping her hair back as she fell. The third floor went by as shrieks started to come from the ground, someone had seen her falling.

Jess squeezed her eyes closed as the second floor flew by. Soon it would all end, all this would be over. She wouldn't have to live without her mother, she would be with her again soon.


There are ALOT of errors in there, but I have never gotten around to correcting them, so till I do manage to correct them, this is it. Hope you guys like it.
09/21/09 04:19
MissyAwww.. this was really good Jess. I really hope there is like.. I dunno.. a muscley fire-fighter dude waiting to catch your falling body with one of those trampoline thingies. (Yes, highly technical terms I'm using here, try to keep up :P) It was a great read! Thanks for sharing it.09/21/09 05:01
Jessica SusserWell, there was going to be a sort of collaborative thing for this, that this was how Ishtar and Jessica met, but I never managed to finish it up. I may have to do that some day.09/21/09 05:18
MissyPlease do!! Your audience demands an encore performance!!!09/21/09 05:29
Jessica SusserLol, if I have enough time this week I'll give it a shot. I may work on correcting this one too, there're alot of grammatical and vocab errors in it.09/21/09 05:33
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