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This page conserves the character fiction forum of the Agora forums. The posts have been left unformatted to make it easier for users to copy them here and paste them into the new forums.

Oren Itanooren12/10/08 18:25View
Missy12/10/08 22:22View
The backstory of Vulpes.Vulpes12/11/08 01:46View
Erica KesselErica Kessel12/11/08 07:52View
Missy's Story.. a Do-over and another ChapterMissy12/11/08 22:38View
UsrBinPerl12/11/08 23:48View
oren12/11/08 23:57View
Kwekwe's BackstoryKwekwe Karu12/12/08 01:02View
UsrBinPerl12/13/08 00:35View
Eternal SunsetMissy12/13/08 12:19View
Kit Ristow12/14/08 00:01View
ShyMathys12/14/08 00:27View
MasksAlissa12/14/08 00:58View
Lorae12/14/08 01:24View
UsrBinPerl12/14/08 22:07View
Missy's Story Continued..Part 3Missy12/16/08 08:43View
Missy's Story Part 4: Innocence ShatteredMissy12/16/08 18:34View
Missy's Story Part 5: Innocence AnnihilatedMissy12/18/08 17:16View
Small DangersVox12/18/08 21:36View
Saint of The Abyss: Part 1Luciferiel12/19/08 05:21View
Zero....-1Justa Zero12/19/08 17:38View
Zero....1Justa Zero12/19/08 18:26View
Óðr’s Daughter. Chapter I: A Guiding DreamAsil Karu12/20/08 02:39View
Omega To Alphaerinnic12/23/08 16:49View
Her Bloody Tears [-Past Event-]Methias12/23/08 18:09View
Lost Kitsune - A Shattered MindKiera12/25/08 18:51View
Usr's story Part IVUsrBinPerl12/27/08 20:34View
The EssexHeir Maelstrom12/29/08 04:23View
Kwekwe's shameKwekwe Karu12/30/08 18:11View
Joint Round Robin Fic Anyone...?erinnic12/30/08 19:07View
God Was On Her Lips As She Diederinnic01/02/09 23:31View
Love and Betrayal - A New Beginningkessjuliesse01/03/09 13:46View
The Diary of Cody Woodhencodywoodhen01/05/09 21:35View
Missy's Story Part 6: Innocence AbductedMissy01/07/09 06:23View
Cursed BladeYannis_Martynov01/08/09 21:27View
Story Thread: Community Round Robin Ficerinnic01/09/09 23:25View
The demon withinCanly Fargis01/11/09 16:14View
Ziau- CoLA's Very Own CasanovaZiau01/13/09 02:09View
Twisted Attentionserinnic01/21/09 20:34View
Inspiration- music and roleplayZiau01/26/09 08:01View
Compilation! Where were you when it all happened?Ziau01/28/09 09:12View
The Clock Struck MidnightMalice Ashdene01/28/09 22:31View
With Precision- a poem by Kelly Welch A.k.A Ziau Jua.Ziau01/29/09 04:36View
Alisa's dicovery of a new world (character sheet + story)Alisa Draconia01/30/09 19:17View
The Shadow Stepper- Ziau the Enshadowed.Ziau02/01/09 07:26View
Krista Lemon arrives to the streets of Lost AngelsKrista02/03/09 00:09View
Back Story Upto the Excile of Rune.RuneCrimson02/03/09 21:59View
War with the Brood, war with the Coven, and the Pack.Ziau02/07/09 04:11View
-- Halcyon's Backstory --Halcyon Nacht02/08/09 00:22View
Planer/Exonar family (aka, Erinyse, Khalan, Viridian, Cummere, Selena)Cummere Mayo02/08/09 03:53View
Kit's BackstoryKit Ristow02/10/09 18:40View
Eyes in the DarkKeyla02/11/09 09:47View
Surfacing Part ILlyr02/13/09 22:21View
Surfacing Part IILlyr02/13/09 22:35View
Tama-Chan: A Cat's Story (Tamara's background)Tamara02/17/09 07:35View
Project: A map of Post Apocalypse North AmericaTamara02/17/09 19:21View
Dreamtime RevelationsWinter02/19/09 18:08View
Reaver-the echo of the BlackwindAntiZero02/23/09 00:43View
On the Origin of SpeciesTamara02/25/09 22:38View
ConfessionKit Ristow02/26/09 01:39View
Personnel File: Pointe, Zsuzsanna C. (Inactive, Deceased)Su Pointe02/26/09 03:32View
Malice, in a Different Kind of WonderlandMalice Ashdene02/27/09 18:07View
The Dark of InspirationKit Ristow03/01/09 21:42View
Jheric: CrucifiedKayle Ashdene03/03/09 10:53View
It's my lifearsene_Braveheart03/05/09 18:18View
The Tradgedy of the HybridDigital Enigma03/29/09 07:09View
The Sin of Wrathmolly switchblade04/02/09 21:28View
Golden BoyEphran Ehrler04/15/09 06:12View
Story About A GirlAesendria04/24/09 15:34View
Climaxe by Smith and WessonSloan04/28/09 06:19View
My new project ATTENTION Russian Characters!Ziau05/01/09 06:42View
**NSFW** A Typical Tuesday Night for MissyMissy05/06/09 20:48View
Post your profile links!Cortero Landar05/07/09 10:25View
Making Logan SufferAesendria05/12/09 07:09View
Jeanne VarunJeanne Varun05/14/09 08:24View
The Vanguard's True PurposeLogan05/16/09 01:03View
Cortero's Infernal ArmorCortero Landar05/16/09 06:52View
Bookstore SurpriseAesendria05/16/09 23:16View
Post your profile links if you have in-story info in them!Cortero Landar05/18/09 10:33View
PromisesAesendria05/24/09 02:44View
Cyber Evolution Bios, Anur Seda, Cyber Reaper, and Commander of CETheassassin06/08/09 11:28View
Was any of it real?Youko_Giha06/12/09 15:28View
A shift in prioritiesLogan06/17/09 04:21View
Going homeLudvig06/17/09 19:10View
'Ren in Japanoren06/18/09 23:11View
Thelma across the boardThelemaJuliesse06/26/09 15:09View
Pre-fiction: How Kayteear got here.Kayteear07/15/09 16:43View
Story TimeCharissa07/17/09 19:03View
Pack Airship RP.Tai07/27/09 02:49View
My CharacterLilith1308/05/09 22:34View
LilithLilith1308/06/09 09:30View
The Haunter in the DarkShadow08/14/09 21:50View
The Flying HeadsKwekwe Karu08/16/09 16:52View
Why selling coffins is impossible in CoLAZiau08/23/09 04:14View
Paint it red!Ziau08/23/09 07:51View
Young Cowards.Ziau08/23/09 08:28View
Great video for RPers and people passionate about writing.Ziau09/05/09 08:55View
Dux - 264 BCDux09/10/09 18:41View
The Thing at South Gate SanitariumShadow09/15/09 22:09View
♪♫ Do you wanna RP my avatar ♪♫Kayteear09/17/09 14:45View
Jessica's MotherJessica Susser09/21/09 04:19View
Ziau Challenged me to. NSFWChasityDawes09/21/09 07:17View
The Divine Machine.................Theassassin09/21/09 22:29View
I Bleed my Blood for Myself.Ziau09/22/09 22:28View
Cronicle of a deathKayteear09/24/09 01:34View
"Please Allow Me to Introduce Myself"DavidJoshua Artful09/26/09 17:07View
Old Versus NewDigital Enigma09/27/09 20:28View
The Shadowed Order, The Eternal Order, Ordo MachinaTheassassin10/06/09 06:55View
Elamyrath's HistoryElamyrath10/10/09 00:52View
The here, the now, the dead. The Minus.TheMinus Ziskey10/10/09 12:41View
Before bed ritual.Amy Guisse10/17/09 04:13View
Alone?Ike10/18/09 15:34View
IS this High School again?Theassassin10/24/09 12:49View
Sidhe vs DrowOrlok Lectar10/29/09 04:08View
Daddy bluesarsene_Braveheart11/17/09 19:01View
Chronicles of SIEagentlyseria11/22/09 12:27View
The Lady In Black(A Drokan Exile Twisted Love Story)AntiZero11/29/09 06:36View
The growing Darkness.Leirain Koray12/01/09 11:04View
The lycanKayteear12/01/09 16:00View
City of Lost Jackman: The Untold Hollywood BlockbusterAntiZero12/02/09 07:11View
Coming home for christmas ..Kes12/10/09 22:17View
Bunneh Vs. Lich, DBZ styleKarsha Yutani12/14/09 11:59View
A FarewellRoland12/16/09 20:50View
Of Death and RebirthDigital Enigma12/21/09 20:14View
The Story of ReocoReoko Farspire02/06/10 20:47View
Homecoming......... The Story of Orpheus DarkfoldOrpheusDarkfold03/11/10 02:27View
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Missing the Oceanricercar03/23/10 22:27View
Letter to the editor: Manners in LATink03/25/10 16:58View
Chasity BackstoryChasityDawes06/14/10 19:43View
Something Black and Violent...DavidJoshua Artful06/19/10 22:23View
Doctor Visiterinnic07/12/10 04:26View
Gabby Perdidevacantghost07/19/10 04:42View
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erinnicThis is a thread designed for anyone interested to contribute to the story being created. So that this can be enjoyable, there are a few rules to be followed:

1. Same rule applies as in CoLA. Don't be an ass. You are offered a unique opportunity in that you have partial control over characters created by other people, don't abuse that. In other words, while we want the story to evolve organically, saying something like "A nuclear missile hits Dallas, destroying everything" or killing off a main character without a proper build up would be kind of rude, as would god modding something like bringing in an all powerful character. We're all experienced role player, don't be an asshole, do unto others, blah blah blah.

2. All posts are to be 300 words or less. Once you reach 300 words you must stop -at- that word, not another word beyond. Microsoft Word and most word processing software have a word count tool. If you are posting where you do not have access to a word count tool, go here: [url]http://www.wordcounttool.com/[/url].

3. You must post to claim that you want to pick up the story next. Post something like "next. claimed. i'll go up" anything simple and to the point. Once you have requested, you have an hours time to get your post up. If you go beyond that time and have not posted, someone else is allowed to put up a claim. If no one else puts up a claim after an hour and you are still prepared to post, you still may.

4. If you are ending a scene please put up a line of ****************************** to indicate such. If your scene ends in between your 300 words, you are of course allowed to begin the next scene.

5. Any questions or comments OOC are NOT allowed in this thread. Take it back to the 'Joint Round Robin Fic Anyone?' thread here: [url]http://ccs-gametech.com/index.php/colaccs-forums?task=viewtopic&id=382&p=1[/url]. If you have any questions that you think may not be appropriate to be discussed openly, feel free to drop me a PM (altho they don't always work so well so be warned) or drop me an IM in world ((Erinnic Hitendra)) as I'm usually online nightly.

6. While this is the CoLA universe, this is NOT Lost Angels. All RP here is separate from in world RPing.

[b]Backstory: [/b]

Dallas, Texas was a battleground easily won when the Demons and Angels came to Earth as a powerful demoness named Lilitu brought her army of Shedim to wipe out any Angels opposing her. Lilitu used the guise of a Holy oasis to lure in the surviving humans of Faith scattered across the United States only to entrap them all to be used as playthings for her horde. The city has remained this way, really only possessing Human and Demon within, for over a decade now. A handful of humans broke free and gained some magicks so that they have a safe haven for their resistance within the Renaissance Hotel in the West Village neighborhood. They are led by a burnt out sage named Ozzy and the tactical heart of their resistance-Kiel and Paddy Healy. Everything in Dallas is about to change dynamics with the return of races who had seemingly up until now given up on this city of Hell...
01/09/09 23:25
erinnic((i went waaaay over the word count on this one, but just because it is an introductory post. so yay me on breaking my own rules))










“Why the -fuck- did I come to Dallas?”

Kiel’s hunter green eyes met the strangers while he uttered a contemptuous snort under his breathe, large hands twisting expertly to reload the Remington 870P shotgun he had carried ever since they surviving humans first looted the police station in Turtle Creek years earlier. Truth be told, he couldn’t have given a single good reason anyone would come to this city, it’s lore must have passed elsewhere by now through the few and far between souls that managed to escape it.

Dallas was a nightmarish spectre of the city that once stood in its place before Wormwood, and not just because of the massive damage done by the falling fragments. No, the city took on a sinister purpose shortly after the demons began their treading on Earth. An elder demoness calling herself Lilitu quietly took shop in the city along with her hordes of Shedim, but kept them at bay initially while she hatched her plan to draw in the few live human bodies scattered across the United States. She called upon two sisters, Laura and Jenna. Using their famous name to call to the faithful amongst humans--making false claims that Dallas would be a Holy oasis, humans flocked with renewed hopes. They all quickly learned that Lilitu was simply amassing her own slave pool for her demonic legion’s pleasures, and the city in its near entire became the Shedim’s twisted pit of a playground.

Things hadn’t exactly looked up since.

Kiel leaned in closer to the guy, his voice coming out in a low hiss as he switched in command mode. “The Shedim are deaf and dumb. Their ears don't hear like ours and she-“ He didn’t use her name, hated the sound of it on his lips. “-Blinded them so they couldn’t gaze upon her. Their vision has adapted to work something like sonar, but fortunately it only works in close range--they have to be at least 3 yards from you. Which means shut the fuck up and try not to move if they get too close. I’m going to draw the attention of the ones on the right flank while you try to move back to the Hotel against the left wall. Once you make it to the Hotel, Paddy will be waiting for you.”

“And if Paddy isn’t there?”

“He’ll be there.” Kiel had become the leader of their ragtag resistance for the most part, only second to Ozzy and mostly then just because Ozzy was older and less rash--but it was his little brother that never let down their charges. Paddy was a small guy, all bones and bright carrot hair shaved close to his scalp so when he stood behind a light the fuzzy hairs made his head look like it was on fire--but he had a heart that the elder of the Healy brothers lacked and it made him useful in ways Kiel knew he could have never been. Paddy would be there, prepared as always to take in new lost souls and keep them safe in the haven he had created within the Renaissance Hotel.

A Blue Norther was making the air whistle around them, causing an unnatural chill to the air but giving some much needed advantage with its distraction. Kiel held his gun tightly against his chest as he did another mental count of the Shedim--four of them total all standing in a group with unseeing eyes searching desperately in every direction. The creatures were tall, the smallest usually about seven feet tall, and looked almost human in shape save for their hoofed feet and the serpentine black skin that made them almost not visible save for the pearlescent sheen their oily bodies gave them. Kiel looked back at the stranger one last time as he made the go ahead signal, hating that he knew the frightened look in the other man’s eyes almost definitely meant he was about to die.

His mouth formed the word “Go” before they both sprung to action, neither feeling very comfortable about the mile of open ground they had to carry before reaching safety.
01/09/09 23:26
Erica KesselKiel watched the stranger start to sidle along the wall, the stranger's eyes wide and locked onto the Shedim, while Kiel himself moved the other direction. He strided swiftly on a vector that took him closer to the demons, and as he approached within about 30 yards swung the barrel of his shotgun up and fired, not bothering to aim very accurately. The slugs scattered in a cloud; a few of them finding their targets and sending spurts of blood into the air as they dug into the tough skin. Kiel watched his distraction fail miserably as the demons reacted by moving out in all different directions, one heading almost straight towards the stranger.

[i]Are these things getting stupider?[/i] Kiel thought as he assessed the situation. The stranger was now frozen in place, which might not be that bad an idea as long as stayed quiet. Kiel took a few steps towards the Shedim heading for the stranger when he noticed movement out of the corner of his eye and noticed one of them was closing in on him. [i]That's a fast one.[/i] He reached into a sack on his belt and pulled out a small green gem, immediately flicking it at the ground, aiming between the demon's legs. The gem hit the dusty ground with a soft thud, following by a shuffling noise as vines started snaking out and wrapping around the Shedim's legs. Kiel quickly made his way closer to other demon, which was getting dangerously close to the stranger at this point.

((So I managed to resist introducing the now undead 2007 Dallas Cowboys into the story for this post, but I can't guarantee I'll have the willpower for the later ones))
01/10/09 19:52
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